Wednesday, 3 August 2016

My version of little red riding

Little red riding hood was awake at 4:00 playing on her iPhone playing Pokemon go and got a text about having to go to countdown and get her some frozen chicken nuggets and ice cream.


she grabbed her coat and money and shoes and left the apartment she walked to count down and on the way she bought some KFC for her and for grandpa she got to tired and could not walk any more so she yelled taxi and the taxi came she got in a drove to countdown.
when she got to countdown she entered and she realised that they were selling ready cooked gluten free chicken nuggets so she bought some of those and buns and goody goody gumdrop ice cream also some chocolate ice cream she paid for it and left.

She started to walk to her grandma's house she past a shop were a lot of people were standing around one man it looked like they were robbing that man so she ran.

The man started to follow her she thought he wanted to grab her or kidnap her so she started to run and he started to run at her she ran all the way to her grandmas house she gave her nana the food and rang the police.

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  1. Corrections:
    Little Red Riding Hood was awake at 4:00 playing on her iPhone and received a saying: you have to go to Countdown and get some frozen chicken nuggets and ice cream.

    She grabbed her coat, money and shoes then left the apartment. She walked to Countdown and on the way she bought some KFC for her and Grandpa. On the way she became really tired and couldn’t walk any more. She called: “TAXI!” and got in one.
    When she arrived at Countdown she realised that they were selling ready cooked gluten free chicken nuggets so she bought some. She also bought buns and Goody Goody Gumdrop ice cream also some Chocolate ice cream. After she bought the food she started her journey home.

    She started to walk to her Grandma’s house when she saw a creepy man.
    The man started to follow her. Little Red Riding Hood assumed he wanted to grab her or kidnap her so she started to run. He ran after. She ran all the way to her Grandma’s house she gave her Nana the food, later she rang the police.

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